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| Wayanad, Kerela |
(I know)
Wings, I gave up
To hide in the web
Which keeps me tangled, sad, content.
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(Therefore I am)We walked tipsy, intoxicated, mildly happy
Exchanged numbers, smiles, a few dance moves and secrets.
Betraying the web, seething to strangle the last smiles out of the beautiful slurring lips.
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p.s.: 1)This Post is being written for THE POETRY CONTEST at Blogjunta.com as a part of WOMEN & BLOGGING month
2)shared with Haiku Heights prompt #34
3) A special thanks to the photographer, Naveen for the beautiful picture.
3) A special thanks to the photographer, Naveen for the beautiful picture.
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16 comments:
Nice acrostics and haiku.. Smiles.. hope you like this, to have loved and lost
Someone is Special
have to say.. loved the end more than the beginning. and yes amazing picture along with it.
Loved it honey. It gives a haunting feeling.
Very beautiful and meaningful.Good job!
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hey god one! impacts and hits deep somewhere..its been the case with all the poetries i read by u! keep it up! :))
Thanx Sarah for coming back to read my poems. :D
I loved the picture.. it says so much about the human condition na?
i loved it! especially your use of contrasts
interesting clash of styles. there's the morning chill and the midnight breeze in it. loved it...
lovely sentiments on wings.
its like the fly voluntarily is resting in the web.. nice imagery, Amropali..
beautiful poem.
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xx
well written amropali
Wonderful imagery! Very well expressed..!
Hugs x
loved the first 3 lines ,,, irony !
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