An interior monologue, a performance, a confession and a song,some words for my best audience - ME.
first of all, the picture is haunting.secondly, your last word took my breath away.
Amazing... And yes I agree the pic is truly spooky!!
brrr.. thats scary, Amropali.. a very powerful haiku!welcome to Haiku Heights :) your tercet isn't technically a haiku.. a haiku has 17 syllables in total :) syllable=pronunciation sounds. eg: Amropali would have 4 syllables, since it is voiced as Am-ro-pa-li. Hope to see you try out. Your effort here in three lines has lot of potential :)
painfulbut nice capture
Mastttt :) wonder how ppl manage to say so much in just countable words :-S
creepy. not the sort of poetry i would wanna read before bedtime :\does that technically count as a haiku btw? isn't it supposed to ne 5-7-5 syllables per line?still, creepy. :|
Really painful!!Its my first visit to your blog (from BJ). I love the layout and feel of your blog.Good Job!
Im falling more and more in love with Haiku!Fantastic, and haunting piece!
This is great! May not be a haiku, but what the hell, it's haunting!!
PinchingYou look even better in new snap
that's the most powerful and hard-hitting and chilling three lines I've ever come across!!!
Short n sweet :)
I know. As it was my first attempt at a Haiku, I googled and saw that English haikus aren't as strict with the syllable count. So.. u know took my liberties. :)Thanx for the encouragement.
I know. As it was my first attempt at a Haiku, I googled and saw that English haikus aren't as strict with the syllable count. So.. u know took my libertiesp.s: I love creepy.
I know!! Me too.Can't wait to try my hands at it again!
I am honoured.
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