Monday, March 14

The Castle of Crossed Destinies

Wayanad, Kerela
 (I know)

Wings, I gave up
To hide in the web 
Which keeps me tangled, sad, content.

*
(Therefore I am)


We walked tipsy, intoxicated, mildly happy
Exchanged numbers, smiles, a few dance moves and secrets.
Betraying the web, seething to strangle the last smiles out of the beautiful slurring lips.


*

p.s.: 1)This Post is being written for THE POETRY CONTEST at Blogjunta.com as a part of WOMEN & BLOGGING month
2)shared with Haiku Heights prompt #34
3) A special thanks to the photographer, Naveen for the beautiful picture. 

16 comments:

Amropali said...

Nice acrostics and haiku.. Smiles.. hope you like this, to have loved and lost

Someone is Special

Amropali said...

have to say.. loved the end more than the beginning. and yes amazing picture along with it.

Amropali said...

Loved it honey. It gives a haunting feeling.

Amropali said...

Very beautiful and meaningful.Good job!
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Amropali said...

hey god one! impacts and hits deep somewhere..its been the case with all the poetries i read by u! keep it up! :))

Amropali said...

Thanx Sarah for coming back to read my poems. :D

Amropali said...

I loved the picture.. it says so much about the human condition na?

Amropali said...

i loved it! especially your use of contrasts

Amropali said...

interesting clash of styles. there's the morning chill and the midnight breeze in it. loved it...

Amropali said...

lovely sentiments on wings.

Amropali said...

its like the fly voluntarily is resting in the web.. nice imagery, Amropali..

Amropali said...

beautiful poem.

Amropali said...

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simply visit me for details...all submissions are to be represented by the end of the week.
Happy Writing.
Looking forward to seeing you share your talent with us.
You rock.
xx

Amropali said...

well written amropali

Amropali said...

Wonderful imagery! Very well expressed..!
Hugs x

Amropali said...

loved the first 3 lines ,,, irony !