thanks Jingle for the award. I'd like to nominate Haggishead |
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(mood)
Some Chat from Chaupati, Bombay.
In the mood for some prose today;
A favourite playlist put on replay.
In the mood for some prose today;
To look at you in slumber sitting by where you lay.
In the mood for some prose today
A bookmark on a page, crying over its overstay.
In the mood for some prose today;
Lazy blinks glued to liquid crystal TV display.
In the mood for some prose today.
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(the morning after)
I cracked a joke and laughed myself.'At least that's 50% of the crowd.'
I looked into my eyes and complimented.'At least I still find a mystery in them.'
I made some pancakes and had it myself. 'At least someone likes what I cook.'
I made some pancakes and had it myself. 'At least someone likes what I cook.'
I read a book and smiled to myself. 'At least The book knows I smiled.'
I looked at you and turned to my side. 'At least someone's not lying next to a beloved-dead(*checks her own heart beat*)'
p.s: shared with Thursdays Poets’ Rally week 41
25 comments:
Wow.
i wud like to have a supper dupper like button...
"I looked at you and turned to my side. 'At least someone's not lying next to a beloved-dead(*checks her own heart beat*)'"-----reminded me of shania twaine's son... "and it only hurts wen i am breathing...my heart only breaks when its beating"...
well exactly do not wats the connection...
*song
loved the form of the poetry *thumbs up*
Great poem. Love the form.
abstract...different.. :)
Thanx Jack.
^_^
Thanx AJO!
Sad. The element of pathos is so strong in the second part!
I too love roses...more than prose
this is a nice poem and congrats for your spring award! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/
beautiful..
you deserve it.
:)
wishes wished and unfulfilled (or are they?). questioning poetry, when longing was for prose ;) enjoyed it, Amropali.
Rally Week 41 - My Poetry
I love prose more than rose.
anyday!
Good one!
congrats Dear :)
Thanx Geeta.
=)
nice thank you
*like*
Very unique and interesting way of poetry.. i-like-it
nice one , poetry emerging from a quest for prose
Nice! There's something different about your style of poetry! Good luck with the Poets Rally thing! Keep writing:)
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RoHiT
dial-a-denial.blogspot.com
Simply simply simply loved it.. light and sweet and real :)
I am from ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/04/02/the-alliterated-odes-the-alliterated-symphonies-of-the-mind/
It's so well written and so simply portrayed
The little things, the hidden desires that we all feel
:) :) :)
A very unique style of writing. Enjoyed it. Congratulation!
http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/04/one-of-those-days.html
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