Thursday, April 7

In the mood for some rose today.

thanks Jingle
for the award. I'd like to nominate Haggishead 


1
(mood)

In the mood for some prose today;
Some Chat from Chaupati, Bombay.

In the mood for some prose today;
A favourite playlist put on replay.

In the mood for some prose today;
 To look at you in slumber sitting by where you lay.

In the mood for some prose today
A bookmark on a page, crying over its overstay.

In the mood for some prose today;
Lazy blinks glued to liquid crystal TV display.


In the mood for some prose today.


2
(the morning after)

I cracked a joke and laughed myself.'At least that's 50% of the crowd.'


I looked into my eyes and complimented.'At least I still find a mystery in them.'

I made some pancakes and had it myself. 'At least someone likes what I cook.'

I read a book and smiled to myself. 'At least The book knows I smiled.'

I looked at you and turned to my side. 'At least someone's not lying next to a beloved-dead(*checks her own heart beat*)'


25 comments:

Amropali said...

Wow.

Amropali said...

i wud like to have a supper dupper like button...

"I looked at you and turned to my side. 'At least someone's not lying next to a beloved-dead(*checks her own heart beat*)'"-----reminded me of shania twaine's son... "and it only hurts wen i am breathing...my heart only breaks when its beating"...
well exactly do not wats the connection...

Amropali said...

*song

Amropali said...

loved the form of the poetry *thumbs up*

Amropali said...

Great poem. Love the form.

Amropali said...

abstract...different.. :)

Amropali said...

Thanx Jack.
^_^

Amropali said...

Thanx AJO!

Amropali said...

Sad. The element of pathos is so strong in the second part!

Amropali said...

I too love roses...more than prose

Amropali said...

this is a nice poem and congrats for your spring award! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/

Amropali said...

beautiful..

you deserve it.
:)

Amropali said...

wishes wished and unfulfilled (or are they?). questioning poetry, when longing was for prose ;) enjoyed it, Amropali.

Rally Week 41 - My Poetry

Amropali said...

I love prose more than rose.
anyday!

Amropali said...

Good one!

Amropali said...

congrats Dear :)

Amropali said...

Thanx Geeta.
=)

Amropali said...

nice thank you

Amropali said...

*like*

Amropali said...

Very unique and interesting way of poetry.. i-like-it

Amropali said...

nice one , poetry emerging from a quest for prose

Amropali said...

Nice! There's something different about your style of poetry! Good luck with the Poets Rally thing! Keep writing:)

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RoHiT
dial-a-denial.blogspot.com

Amropali said...

Simply simply simply loved it.. light and sweet and real :)
I am from ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/04/02/the-alliterated-odes-the-alliterated-symphonies-of-the-mind/

Amropali said...

It's so well written and so simply portrayed
The little things, the hidden desires that we all feel
:) :) :)

Amropali said...

A very unique style of writing. Enjoyed it. Congratulation!

http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/04/one-of-those-days.html