Monday, April 18

Pretend

Thanking Jingle for the award
You move into a new city.
Away from the madness and the past.
You find a new job and with it, independence.
First day at work, your eyes spot him in the crowd.

He is incredibly handsome;
Incredibly out of your league.
But for some strange reason he spots you too.
And he'd like to fuck you!

He steals you away from the loaded work-table,
And takes you to an unmade, well-slept in bed.



Your head screams out all the things you saw in the mirror each day-
hideous, unattractive, rejected and always unwanted.
Before you question him-
'why do you want me?'

-He pretends that your curves are delectable 
and your scars sexy. 
His voice sounds like soft silken touch 
as he moans your name gently into your ears.


And you ...
You shut out your screaming head,
Close your eyes tight, 

And pretend he didn't talk to other girls like that.


shared with poetry potluck. and Thursday Poets' Rally#42.

31 comments:

Amropali said...

In the end you count your change and ask yourself was riding the bus worth the money.

Amropali said...

WOW!!! your poem just blew my mind. AMAZING!

Amropali said...

and sometimes, there is no answer.

Amropali said...

Thanx S,
I am glad you liked it!!

Amropali said...

Nice !!

Amropali said...

wow, awesome stuff. The subtext was great, very well crafted! :)

Amropali said...

Wow! the next time you call me a poet and a natural, I will take a certificate from you. You blow my mind. You inspire me to write. I am proud, of you. :) Awesome this is.

Amropali said...

wow!!! That is immense, coming from you!!!

seriously!!!

<3 ya!!

Amropali said...

Thanx!!

Amropali said...

straight up and hard, Amropali! I think thats Neeraja coming before my comment? She just said it all :)

My Potluck Post. It's Random This Time.

Amropali said...

powerful highlight of relationship issues.
bless you.

A++

Amropali said...

indeed a great post to read.. :) awesome

Amropali said...

fantastic write! masked harsh truth will gonna hurt :)

Amropali said...

hmmm... hmmmm... hmmmmmm..... what can i say? sensuous, sultry, madness! no wonder some woman hated men.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

Amropali said...

that was a hard hitting one! seriously! bold and poignant! d sharpness definitely affects the reader at some level in here...well done!

Amropali said...

thanx Sarah.

was reading some article that day and something hit me..
this is the result.

Amropali said...

This is incredible. write on!

Luna

Amropali said...

truly awesome.. the fluidity of intimacy sparkled here..:) keep on writing..

Amropali said...

Bold ,harsh simple powerful write...............

Amropali said...

So much for long engagements :) I just hope it didn't leave more, emotional, scars!

Amropali said...

The flow is so easy, so well-written. The meaning, so not! Good work.

Amropali said...

something and all.. to which you know how i feel.. amazingly put

Amropali said...

Dang! Raw and powerful. Few can get away with writing with such grit - But you, you have pulled it off with an outstanding effectiveness. Great job!

Amropali said...

honest and cool,

happy rally.

Amropali said...

Sometimes, the ride is worth it, if only for the experience. It's all about perspective. Hey, if that one night made you feel like you were the most beautiful and desirable creature on the planet, then it served its purpose.

Love this! You deserve the Hot Award!

Amropali said...

Thank you so much. :)

Amropali said...

Animal attraction in this. Hope you enjoyed the ride. Some people are turned on by scars you know ,)

Amropali said...

This is fiction. I hope my protagonist enjoyed it too! =p

P.s: some scars are sexy!

Amropali said...

You've told it like it is, the things we think and do but don't want to recognize or admit to. Kudos!

Amropali said...

So heartwrenching. Powerful words.

Amropali said...

Raw and sad, interesting write - thanks